Feedback and Revisions

My partner and I have decided to re-shoot the scenes with the detective because the dialogue does not sound natural and the actors seemed nervous. We are making the detective a girl because we had some difficulties with the detectives costume and make-up. When we re-shoot the detective scenes the actors will wear different cloths to show it is a different day. We also have to move the opening credits to the beginning of the opening scene instead of the end so it does not look like a short film. We will also get rid of the black screen with the title and moving the title to the beginning. My partner and I will carry out these changes by re-shooting the scenes with the detective on January 20th and relocate the opening credits.