3rd Quarter Submission
For our first revision my partner and I moved the opening credits from the end to the beginning of the opening scene. My partner and I did this to make it not seem like a short film or a trailer. The second revision my partner and I did was re-shooting the scenes with the detective in it because the dialogue did not sound natural and the actors seemed nervous. While reshooting we decided to make the detective a girl because we had some difficulties with the detective's make-up. Also we had the actors wear different cloths to help show it is a different day. By doing this it helps our film look more natural and make more sense. For my partner and my third revision we changed the title to The Unknown because we felt that No Trespassing as the title did not relate to the film that much. Were as The Unknown gives the idea that the girls do not know what happened to Mia and do not know what is on the other side of the fence. My partner and I also moved the title to the beginning an...
